Please see this article:
Movie Reviews 25
http://www.boddunan.com/component/content/article/7-movies/8536-movie-reviews-25.html?directory=3
Following is a piece of the contents of this article… Do you think it is a genuine article that will earn good name for the site Boddunan:
“this movie have no story, its just abt the daily food consumed in us
if this is the food which we consumed thn i can say we r taking shit....
plz see this movie if u r consuming fast food,
this movie will show u the realty of big food corporation like McDonalds, KFC
9/10 ”
Please check grammar, style, spelling that will impress the readers?
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Lohit Seth. Let me first point out mistakes in your post- "I am agree" is wrong. It should be 'I agree'. This article don't- is wrong. It should be- This article doesn't.
The second sentence- 'some my articles link in ur' is apparently bad English. It should be- "I have given links of some of my articles in your." "One article permit..' should be 'Permit one article."
I have checked the article and posted my comments there. The author has given good comments on some movies but has shown lack of care in language. May be the film matter is treated lightly and so the language.
The second sentence- 'some my articles link in ur' is apparently bad English. It should be- "I have given links of some of my articles in your." "One article permit..' should be 'Permit one article."
I have checked the article and posted my comments there. The author has given good comments on some movies but has shown lack of care in language. May be the film matter is treated lightly and so the language.
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