A Poem to Bring Out Kumaresh!

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I cannot claim to be as good a poet as Kumaresh is, but nevertheless, with great efforts and with my brains spinning, I have tried my hand at writing a small poem for our great friend Kumaresh!

I hope that this at least brings him out!! Oh my head!! Spinning from so much efforts!!

In the flowers, you are the cauliflower
In the jewels, you are the handcuffs
In the sky, you are the flying duck
In the jungles, there is only you
'coz you scared away all the apes who loved you
That’s why we all at boddunan, MISS YOU!!!
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Thanks Kumaresh for your very kind words! You have created this poetic environment and credit and discredit all are lumped into your account!!!

@Thanks Nagalakshmi!
Poems are raining
Without any training
No loss no gaining
It is so entertaining


It (poem) is hidden insight
comes out like a light
poem is poet's might
it reflects his sight



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Here our poet laureate sings! Wow!! May I suggest a little change,Sir,in the last line? It reflects Her (Kalyani's)Sight Too!!!
Thats very nice to see another poem from Kumaresh... :)

@Chinmoy.... Do not say GOOD BYE to poems.... What ever you say, I feel it to be poem... :laugh: :P :P :P :P
I enter the kitchen to see wats cooking,
And I try hard to think and I keep looking.

Looking for the Vegs and to prepare the breads,
I know not what might be the best.

I suddenly glance upon a set,
and see that I remembered the bet.

Of the 'K' fights happening to be the poet,
I say,all of you have given your best!!

With Kalyani keeping Kumerash as the target,
And Deepti and Chinmoy rolling on the carpet.

Supporting the racket is Nagalakshmi,
And Neetu's comments fully appreciating

I know not what I was looking,
But I think this thread is just rocking!!!! :) :)
Swetha,really a cool poem.Keep up the good work!!! :) :)
Wow Swetha... Its great.... Now you have proved again to be ENGLISH MOM.... :)
Great Mom Arrives with Her Poem
Let Us Hail it As Another Gem!
Lending A Soft and Sweet Glow
Leaving Us to Say,'WOW,WOW'!!
What Can We Crave But Your Presence
That Would Add To Poetic Elegance!
What Else This Poor Soul Can Say?
3 Cheers for Sweta Mom H........y!
WOW WOW WOW!!!

Swetha that's a pure gem from you!! Sparks are indeed flying!!

Like Kumaresh says in his deeply thoughtful poem, its raining poets!!

Thank god Chinmoy, you haven't quit poeting!! :laugh: or else we would miss reading some nice poems!!

Swetha's a poet too
Needs a title two
I thought and I thought
Words flying away like a moth
sniff sniff sniff!
'Tis what I got
Real mean English Mom
Now named the Poetess Laureate

Phewwwwwwww!!!!
Swetha,that's really superb poem ,yes you have proved again to be ENGLISH MOM.....Keep up the good work!!

chinmoy and kalyani superb poems from your side too...

so now we have 2 great poets and two great poetess....great!!!
hahahha

Thankyou all for the tremendous response!!!!

Now I will have to carry a baggage of poems behind my back :)
Surely, whosoever eyes has fallen on this thread has been intoxicated with the wine of poetry
@Kalyani


Thought of seriously Quitting Poetry Was Real
As my Proses and Poems Are Not Feeling Well,
In Their Regular Fights For Claiming My Love
They Are Not Happy to Receive It In Half!
Poems say:What Did You Get Writing Proses,
And Look What Have I Brought,Only Roses!
Sitting on the Rocks Not Knowing My Mind,
Would My Readers Lift Me Out Of This Bind!!!
very good chinmoy......once again you have proved to be a very good poet....

please don't think to quit writing poetry,you are a very good job....so continue writing...

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How are you able to get the right phrases Chinmoy... .This is amazing...

Well Done... :) :) :)
Thank You Deepti For Your Wordy Gift
Which Gives This Poet A Heady Lift!
No More Quarrels With Prose and Poem
Both Have Agreed To Stay In My Realm!
Life Is A Mix of Both Bitter and Sweet.
Why Some People Forget When They Tweet!
"No More Quarrels With Prose and Poem" ???

Chinmoy, I never quarreled with you :dry: :dry: :dry:


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chinmoymukherjee wrote:
[quote]Thank You Deepti For Your Wordy Gift
Which Gives This Poet A Heady Lift!
No More Quarrels With Prose and Poem
Both Have Agreed To Stay In My Realm!
Life Is A Mix of Both Bitter and Sweet.
Why Some People Forget When They Tweet! [/quote]


agian a very good poem chinmoy....DEEPTI that is chinmoy"s new style of expressing his feelings...

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