{CJATTACHMENT ["id": 10934]}
When It Comes and Goes Laden with Many A Print
To be A Part of Our Life,Laced Images With Tint,
Some Have Been Bright,Leaving Many Colorless Blanks!
Hopes Ruled Life, Yet Eluding the Grasping Hands
Of Fulfillment;the Glory of A Few With Crowning Success
Scarcely Hide the Frowning Glare of Failure of Others!
Be it 2013 Or Any, Eternal Truth is Life is Like This
Success and Failure are Twins,A case of a Hit or A Miss!
Let Us All Be Steadfast in Our Goals in the Year Ahead
Who Knows? The Frowning Blanks in Our Canvas May Shed
Its Empty Robe of Colorlessness With Success to Share
In the Year Coming!! Wish You All A Happy New Year!!
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{CJATTACHMENT ["id": 10934]}
When It Comes and Goes Laden with Many A Print
To be A Part of Our Life,Laced Images With Tint,
Some Have Been Bright,Leaving Many Colorless Blanks!
Hopes Ruled Life, Yet Eluding the Grasping Hands
Of Fulfillment;the Glory of A Few With Crowning Success
Scarcely Hide the Frowning Glare of Failure of Others!
Be it 2013 Or Any, Eternal Truth is Life is Like This
Success and Failure are Twins,A case of a Hit or A Miss!
Let Us All Be Steadfast in Our Goals in the Year Ahead
Who Knows? The Frowning Blanks in Our Canvas May Shed
Its Empty Robe of Colorlessness With Success to Share
In the Year Coming!! Wish You All A Happy New Year!!
Thanks for the beautiful wishes- Here is how I think-
Life Is Like A 365 Blank Page Book - And I Know For Certain People Or May Be It Is Available To Each One Of Us Today, The Beginning Of 2014 - The First Blank Page Of A Book of 365 pages. I Have To Write FIRST Page Today - That will Perhaps Bring A Positive Change In Me - And I Have To Write 365 Such Pages This Year - And This Is Not A Resolution - HAPPY NEW YEAR TO All
{CJATTACHMENT ["id": 10934]}
When It Comes and Goes Laden with Many A Print
To be A Part of Our Life,Laced Images With Tint,
Some Have Been Bright,Leaving Many Colorless Blanks!
Hopes Ruled Life, Yet Eluding the Grasping Hands
Of Fulfillment;the Glory of A Few With Crowning Success
Scarcely Hide the Frowning Glare of Failure of Others!
Be it 2013 Or Any, Eternal Truth is Life is Like This
Success and Failure are Twins,A case of a Hit or A Miss!
Let Us All Be Steadfast in Our Goals in the Year Ahead
Who Knows? The Frowning Blanks in Our Canvas May Shed
Its Empty Robe of Colorlessness With Success to Share
In the Year Coming!! Wish You All A Happy New Year!!
Your lyrical message on the very opening of New year soothed my senses.it made me see those rays of hopes just emanating from behind the Blue. It left an indelible mark on my heart.
A happy New year to you and all the members of this 'kutumbukam' ,Boddunan.
{CJATTACHMENT ["id": 10934]}brilliant poem, you are a literary genius, happy new year to you. :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: some part of poem is in sadistic tone, is everything alright for you in previous year?
When It Comes and Goes Laden with Many A Print
To be A Part of Our Life,Laced Images With Tint,
Some Have Been Bright,Leaving Many Colorless Blanks!
Hopes Ruled Life, Yet Eluding the Grasping Hands
Of Fulfillment;the Glory of A Few With Crowning Success
Scarcely Hide the Frowning Glare of Failure of Others!
Be it 2013 Or Any, Eternal Truth is Life is Like This
Success and Failure are Twins,A case of a Hit or A Miss!
Let Us All Be Steadfast in Our Goals in the Year Ahead
Who Knows? The Frowning Blanks in Our Canvas May Shed
Its Empty Robe of Colorlessness With Success to Share
In the Year Coming!! Wish You All A Happy New Year!!
{CJATTACHMENT ["id": 10934]}
When It Comes and Goes Laden with Many A Print
To be A Part of Our Life,Laced Images With Tint,
Some Have Been Bright,Leaving Many Colorless Blanks!
Hopes Ruled Life, Yet Eluding the Grasping Hands
Of Fulfillment;the Glory of A Few With Crowning Success
Scarcely Hide the Frowning Glare of Failure of Others!
Be it 2013 Or Any, Eternal Truth is Life is Like This
Success and Failure are Twins,A case of a Hit or A Miss!
Let Us All Be Steadfast in Our Goals in the Year Ahead
Who Knows? The Frowning Blanks in Our Canvas May Shed
Its Empty Robe of Colorlessness With Success to Share
In the Year Coming!! Wish You All A Happy New Year!!
Wonderful thoughts ! Let us colectively hope for a better tomorrow for our nation....personally let us strive to better ourselvesin the coming year ! Happy new Year to all the members and friends :)
The fireworks at Sydney harbor bridge and Dubai burj Kalifa were mind boggling ! what a fantastic display !
Wish you all a very happy and a prosperous new year!
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An incredible creation from young Arnav. My Aashirwad to Arnav and many thanks to Nandurkar couple.
A happy new year to all.
Thank you very much Rambabu! Wish you and your family too a very happy new year! I conveyed your wishes to my son and he was very happy! :)
Wish you all a very happy and a prosperous new year!
{CJATTACHMENT ["id": 10937]}
An incredible creation from young Arnav. My Aashirwad to Arnav and many thanks to Nandurkar couple.
A happy new year to all.
Yes, a very very promising one and I wish him all success as he grows and evolves!!
{CJATTACHMENT ["id": 10934]}brilliant poem, you are a literary genius, happy new year to you. :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: some part of poem is in sadistic tone, is everything alright for you in previous year?
When It Comes and Goes Laden with Many A Print
To be A Part of Our Life,Laced Images With Tint,
Some Have Been Bright,Leaving Many Colorless Blanks!
Hopes Ruled Life, Yet Eluding the Grasping Hands
Of Fulfillment;the Glory of A Few With Crowning Success
Scarcely Hide the Frowning Glare of Failure of Others!
Be it 2013 Or Any, Eternal Truth is Life is Like This
Success and Failure are Twins,A case of a Hit or A Miss!
Let Us All Be Steadfast in Our Goals in the Year Ahead
Who Knows? The Frowning Blanks in Our Canvas May Shed
Its Empty Robe of Colorlessness With Success to Share
In the Year Coming!! Wish You All A Happy New Year!!
@ Kalyani
Do you find it, now? I have a feeling that my good friend Mohan might have been suggesting a few sad tones in my poem resulting out unfulfilled desires of many as no year in a person's life could be an unmitigated disaster or complete success. Success itself contains seeds of failures!!
{CJATTACHMENT ["id": 10934]}brilliant poem, you are a literary genius, happy new year to you. :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: some part of poem is in sadistic tone, is everything alright for you in previous year?
When It Comes and Goes Laden with Many A Print
To be A Part of Our Life,Laced Images With Tint,
Some Have Been Bright,Leaving Many Colorless Blanks!
Hopes Ruled Life, Yet Eluding the Grasping Hands
Of Fulfillment;the Glory of A Few With Crowning Success
Scarcely Hide the Frowning Glare of Failure of Others!
Be it 2013 Or Any, Eternal Truth is Life is Like This
Success and Failure are Twins,A case of a Hit or A Miss!
Let Us All Be Steadfast in Our Goals in the Year Ahead
Who Knows? The Frowning Blanks in Our Canvas May Shed
Its Empty Robe of Colorlessness With Success to Share
In the Year Coming!! Wish You All A Happy New Year!!
@ Kalyani
Do you find it, now? I have a feeling that my good friend Mohan might have been suggesting a few sad tones in my poem resulting out unfulfilled desires of many as no year in a person's life could be an unmitigated disaster or complete success. Success itself contains seeds of failures!!
Oh! I missed that post although I looked carefully! I think what Mohan means is sad or melancholy note, sadistic means something different! :blink: And think about it, roots of every new beginning lies in something old withering away or dying away, all happinesses too have undertones of some sorrows or griefs! It is the nature's rule! But heaven forbid, the tables turn and it all becomes sadistic instead of sad! :ohmy:
I was talking of feeling of thoughtful sadness, not sadistic tone, I searched this word on dictionary and found it has a bad meaning, I use wrong word, my English is always poor, it is a brilliant poem and I am admire of yours poetry, thanks.{CJATTACHMENT ["id": 10934]}brilliant poem, you are a literary genius, happy new year to you. :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: some part of poem is in sadistic tone, is everything alright for you in previous year?
When It Comes and Goes Laden with Many A Print
To be A Part of Our Life,Laced Images With Tint,
Some Have Been Bright,Leaving Many Colorless Blanks!
Hopes Ruled Life, Yet Eluding the Grasping Hands
Of Fulfillment;the Glory of A Few With Crowning Success
Scarcely Hide the Frowning Glare of Failure of Others!
Be it 2013 Or Any, Eternal Truth is Life is Like This
Success and Failure are Twins,A case of a Hit or A Miss!
Let Us All Be Steadfast in Our Goals in the Year Ahead
Who Knows? The Frowning Blanks in Our Canvas May Shed
Its Empty Robe of Colorlessness With Success to Share
In the Year Coming!! Wish You All A Happy New Year!!
@ Kalyani
Do you find it, now? I have a feeling that my good friend Mohan might have been suggesting a few sad tones in my poem resulting out unfulfilled desires of many as no year in a person's life could be an unmitigated disaster or complete success. Success itself contains seeds of failures!!
Oh! I missed that post although I looked carefully! I think what Mohan means is sad or melancholy note, sadistic means something different! :blink: And think about it, roots of every new beginning lies in something old withering away or dying away, all happinesses too have undertones of some sorrows or griefs! It is the nature's rule! But heaven forbid, the tables turn and it all becomes sadistic instead of sad! :ohmy:
@ Ram babu, you can read between what I am trying to convey, I used wrong words definitely, I am not criticizing an excellent poem, just use wrong word, English is always difficult for me.
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