One of the Creativity of Ronark Bhardwaj

Hmm.. I don't know much about poem writing. But it sounds good, so well done.;)

It sounds like a poem full of love. I think if you keep writing such poems, you can have a good collection in the end.

Is this poem about one side love as the beloved does not answer as the poet desires?

Is this poem about one side love as the beloved does not answer as the poet desires?

Maybe poet did not dare express his feelings in presence of his beloved.

Is this poem about one side love as the beloved does not answer as the poet desires?

Maybe poet did not dare express his feelings in presence of his beloved.

poet (Ronak Bhardwaj) is expressing his feelings but wonders why his beloved does not answer. Thus it is apparently one side love.

Is this poem about one side love as the beloved does not answer as the poet desires?

Maybe poet did not dare express his feelings in presence of his beloved.

Yes it seems the poet is in the initial stages where he still has not expressed his love.

It is a good poem. In this poem,Poet want to express his love, But he struck in front of her.

Well Done. Keep it up.

Is this poem about one side love as the beloved does not answer as the poet desires?

Maybe poet did not dare express his feelings in presence of his beloved.

poet (Ronak Bhardwaj) is expressing his feelings but wonders why his beloved does not answer. Thus it is apparently one side love.

I haven't fallen in love with anyone. I have just created this poem through my imaginations.

Is this poem about one side love as the beloved does not answer as the poet desires?

Maybe poet did not dare express his feelings in presence of his beloved.

Sirji, thuvanu pata hoga ki Punjabiyan de kol Daring Kot kot ke Bhri hondi hai.

Is this poem about one side love as the beloved does not answer as the poet desires?

Maybe poet did not dare express his feelings in presence of his beloved.

poet (Ronak Bhardwaj) is expressing his feelings but wonders why his beloved does not answer. Thus it is apparently one side love.

I haven't fallen in love with anyone. I have just created this poem through my imaginations.

Good that you gave an answer to try stop us from guessing. :laugh:

Is this poem about one side love as the beloved does not answer as the poet desires?

Maybe poet did not dare express his feelings in presence of his beloved.

Sirji, thuvanu pata hoga ki Punjabiyan de kol Daring Kot kot ke Bhri hondi hai.

Yane tusi agree karde ho ki kavita twadi apani kahani hei. Keep it up, I thought Gujarati Punjabi thodi daring jedi miss kar ditti hei. ;)

Is this poem about one side love as the beloved does not answer as the poet desires?

Maybe poet did not dare express his feelings in presence of his beloved.

Sirji, thuvanu pata hoga ki Punjabiyan de kol Daring Kot kot ke Bhri hondi hai.

Yane tusi agree karde ho ki kavita twadi apani kahani hei. Keep it up, I thought Gujarati Punjabi thodi daring jedi miss kar ditti hei. ;)

Oh I see, this is so evident from the kind of poem you wrote. :P Keep writing more!

Certainly you have that imagination necessary to write poetry. But remember any skill will can be turned in to excellence with consistence and perseverance . Cultivate it religiously. Good luck.

Is this poem about one side love as the beloved does not answer as the poet desires?

Maybe poet did not dare express his feelings in presence of his beloved.

poet (Ronak Bhardwaj) is expressing his feelings but wonders why his beloved does not answer. Thus it is apparently one side love.

I haven't fallen in love with anyone. I have just created this poem through my imaginations.

Good that you gave an answer to try stop us from guessing. :laugh:

I like to create such poems to generate interest. Such things only comes when you are alone.

Actual love will not make poem or story. Creativity depends more on fantasy.

Is this poem about one side love as the beloved does not answer as the poet desires?

Maybe poet did not dare express his feelings in presence of his beloved.

poet (Ronak Bhardwaj) is expressing his feelings but wonders why his beloved does not answer. Thus it is apparently one side love.

I haven't fallen in love with anyone. I have just created this poem through my imaginations.

Good that you gave an answer to try stop us from guessing. :laugh:

I like to create such poems to generate interest. Such things only comes when you are alone.

Alone?
Okay this is for you Ronark
You really inspired me
Thank you
I feel more alone
As the night goes on longer
a bit more longer.
I feel even more weaker,
at your mere thought.
I feel like broken,
I look at the sky
as my last resort.

Is this poem about one side love as the beloved does not answer as the poet desires?

Maybe poet did not dare express his feelings in presence of his beloved.

poet (Ronak Bhardwaj) is expressing his feelings but wonders why his beloved does not answer. Thus it is apparently one side love.

I haven't fallen in love with anyone. I have just created this poem through my imaginations.

Good that you gave an answer to try stop us from guessing. :laugh:

I like to create such poems to generate interest. Such things only comes when you are alone.

Alone?
Okay this is for you Ronark
You really inspired me
Thank you
I feel more alone
As the night goes on longer
a bit more longer.
I feel even more weaker,
at your mere thought.
I feel like broken,
I look at the sky
as my last resort.

You see, how you are being inspired by seeing another good work. congratulations. Continue your good work.

Looks like you have fallen head-over-heels in love with someone. Good efforts, keep writing and more importantly, say it to the one concerned!! :cheer: :cheer:

One more time. I have come with another poem. I hope everybody would like it.


There is no single day, when I don't think about you,
There is no single day, when I don't listen your name anywhere,
There is no single day, when i didn't try to question myself about you,
There is no single day, when i didn't figure it out why this happens
There is no single day, when i didn't try to question to God, about why this happens,
There is no single day, when i didn't think to come out from this and live a good life,
There is no single day, when life don't play with me,
There would be days, when i would be free from these happenings,
There would be days, when my questioned will be answered,
There would be happy days, once again,
There would be days to live my life.