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everyone who write poems please do share one of your original poem here or few lines of your poems...

my poem-title-"ALL ALONE"

Miles I have crossed,
And miles I have to go,
But the only thing I know,
That I will pass every path,
Howsoever far I have to go.

I was not alone before,
The pain was there,
But it hurts now more.

It seems to be so unreal,
That many a times I have faced this fear,
I am broken into pieces now,
And with every piece I feel so down.


These are few lines of my poem I have shared with you all.. Now Its your turn..

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[quote]baby angel wrote:
after reading all this thread a song came in my mind-"mai shayar to nahi magar ae hasin jabse dekha maine tujhko mujhko shayari aa gayi"..
now a new role is added in the list of several roles i am playing in this world.
a philosopher hehehehehe


@Kalyani

Would call her philosopher by half yet?
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I would dare not now!!! If I wore a hat, I would surely eat it!!! :woohoo: :woohoo: :laugh: :laugh:
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Where is our Boddunan poet are he is watching or sleeping.

{:-{)}
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Where is our Boddunan poet are he is watching or sleeping.

{:-{)}


I can't even understand the tense of this sentence...full of grammar mistakes.....
What does Sasi actually mean? He even forget to add full stops ;) ;) ;)
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Sandhya take it easy and continue your work.............
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Sandhya take it easy and continue your work.............


Even then you are not ready to correct that sentence :P

Can you correct that sentence grammatically?
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I am busy with forums I cannot correct it I kept a goal this week so I want to achieve it so no compromising here.
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I am busy with forums I cannot correct it I kept a goal this week so I want to achieve it so no compromising here.


I want to see you Member of this week :P Many weeks have passed since I see you in that position
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Yes I am not in leader board many of weeks now I want to be in leader board definitely to achieve that.
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Yes I am not in leader board many of weeks now I want to be in leader board definitely to achieve that.


It's one of the awfully funniest one I have ever come across!
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Yes Chinmoy jee nearly one month over when I was in leader board which made me depress so I am eager to fight for that now. :P :P
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Yes Chinmoy jee nearly one month over when I was in leader board which made me depress so I am eager to fight for that now. :P :P


Quite a fight!!
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Yes Chinmoy jee nearly one month over when I was in leader board which made me depress so I am eager to fight for that now. :P :P


Quite a fight!!
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I don't know why Sasi always forget to add full stops in his sentences...
Can any member give me an answer????
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Sandhya I am a Gajini. I had a short memory loss so I forget everything.
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Sandhya I am a Gajini. I had a short memory loss so I forget everything.

Now a word itself is forgotten... :huh:
It's short term memory loss.....not short memory loss :silly: :blink:
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Yes I am forgetting each and everything and looking for a correct doctor.
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Yes I am forgetting each and everything and looking for a correct doctor.


Will you forget all of us....now you miss words and full stops only :evil: :evil: :evil:
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Yes after getting old I will forget each and everything and become real Ghazni.
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Yes after getting old I will forget each and everything and become real Ghazni.

At teh age of 26 itself, you are forgetting everything. Then what about 60 or 70 :evil: :evil: :evil:
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Sandhya I am saying about the age of 60 and 70 only. That is the real Ghazini age for all now.
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Yes after getting old I will forget each and everything and become real Ghazni.

At teh age of 26 itself, you are forgetting everything. Then what about 60 or 70 :evil: :evil: :evil:


Don't worry, by that time memory transplant would be available!!
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