everyone who write poems please do share one of your original poem here or few lines of your poems...
my poem-title-"ALL ALONE"
Miles I have crossed,
And miles I have to go,
But the only thing I know,
That I will pass every path,
Howsoever far I have to go.
I was not alone before,
The pain was there,
But it hurts now more.
It seems to be so unreal,
That many a times I have faced this fear,
I am broken into pieces now,
And with every piece I feel so down.
These are few lines of my poem I have shared with you all.. Now Its your turn..
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Its not a song although similar lyrics may have been used! I read it in one of the many mail forwards that I keep getting! I keep getting lot of shayaris in mail, more than I like!! :S
No friends forward me Hindi mails.....all know only Malayalam and English :woohoo: :woohoo: :woohoo:
I am an exceptional case among my known ones :sick:
From the day first i was reading her name here and there and i always wanted to know who she is and here it comes now i got why people cherish and love her so much.. :)
That's why I uploaded my photo at least for a while....I didn't want to leave all of you loving people without even let you know, how my face would look like. :P
But again.....I can't leave you people, so sharing a little time from my present busy assignment.
Let me try to do an instant poem for you people....
Anjaane lagtha hai hume jab nayi duniya koi
Dastak dethi hai achanak kabhi
Veerane lagtha hai par jab majbooran humhein
Woh duniya chodke jaana bhi padtha hai
Lekin thanhaayiyom mein yaadein jab
Aahat detha hai kabhi kabhi
Waapas aana bhi padtha hai zaroor....
Kyon ki apna koi keemthi cheez bhoolkar
Door jaana aasaan nahi hota kabhi kabhi....
Either copied or written yourself that not matters,the thing which matters is the love that is reflecting from these words of yours for the members of boddunan..keep smiling sandhya ji..
Im very little to say this to you but i wish that all your dreams come true.
may god bless you. :)
From the day first i was reading her name here and there and i always wanted to know who she is and here it comes now i got why people cherish and love her so much.. :)
That's why I uploaded my photo at least for a while....I didn't want to leave all of you loving people without even let you know, how my face would look like. :P
But again.....I can't leave you people, so sharing a little time from my present busy assignment.
Let me try to do an instant poem for you people....
Anjaane lagtha hai hume jab nayi duniya koi
Dastak dethi hai achanak kabhi
Veerane lagtha hai par jab majbooran humhein
Woh duniya chodke jaana bhi padtha hai
Lekin thanhaayiyom mein yaadein jab
Aahat detha hai kabhi kabhi
Waapas aana bhi padtha hai zaroor....
Kyon ki apna koi keemthi cheez bhoolkar
Door jaana aasaan nahi hota kabhi kabhi....
Either copied or written yourself that not matters,the thing which matters is the love that is reflecting from these words of yours for the members of boddunan..keep smiling sandhya ji..
Im very little to say this to you but i wish that all your dreams come true.
may god bless you. :)
It's true...those words just came into my mind. Just a reflection of my feelings towards you people, but it took half hour to complete it. I was waiting for suitable words with this forum post opened :cheer: :woohoo: :woohoo: :woohoo:
But I don't think it's a great poem at all....just an instant mix :P
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[quote]Kalyani Nandurkar wrote:
Its not a song although similar lyrics may have been used! I read it in one of the many mail forwards that I keep getting! I keep getting lot of shayaris in mail, more than I like!!
It's copy material! Are you sure!!
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What difference does it really make, like the wise baby just said! :woohoo: :laugh:
Its not a song although similar lyrics may have been used! I read it in one of the many mail forwards that I keep getting! I keep getting lot of shayaris in mail, more than I like!!
It's copy material! Are you sure!!
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What difference does it really make, like the wise baby just said! :woohoo: :laugh:
From the day first i was reading her name here and there and i always wanted to know who she is and here it comes now i got why people cherish and love her so much.. :)
That's why I uploaded my photo at least for a while....I didn't want to leave all of you loving people without even let you know, how my face would look like. :P
But again.....I can't leave you people, so sharing a little time from my present busy assignment.
Let me try to do an instant poem for you people....
Anjaane lagtha hai hume jab nayi duniya koi
Dastak dethi hai achanak kabhi
Veerane lagtha hai par jab majbooran humhein
Woh duniya chodke jaana bhi padtha hai
Lekin thanhaayiyom mein yaadein jab
Aahat detha hai kabhi kabhi
Waapas aana bhi padtha hai zaroor....
Kyon ki apna koi keemthi cheez bhoolkar
Door jaana aasaan nahi hota kabhi kabhi....
Either copied or written yourself that not matters,the thing which matters is the love that is reflecting from these words of yours for the members of boddunan..keep smiling sandhya ji..
Im very little to say this to you but i wish that all your dreams come true.
may god bless you. :)
It's true...those words just came into my mind. Just a reflection of my feelings towards you people, but it took half hour to complete it. I was waiting for suitable words with this forum post opened :cheer: :woohoo: :woohoo: :woohoo:
But I don't think it's a great poem at all....just an instant mix :P
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its sometimes not about great or not sometimes it should be that by which feeling it is done.if you are doing some work with good intention then dont care about the results.because if its for good it will definately be liked by everyone.some things should not be categorized in great or not.
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its sometimes not about great or not sometimes it should be that by which feeling it is done.if you are doing some work with good intention then dont care about the results.because if its for good it will definately be liked by everyone.some things should not be categorized in great or not. [/quote]
A Baby Philosopher in the making???? :woohoo: :laugh: :)
its sometimes not about great or not sometimes it should be that by which feeling it is done.if you are doing some work with good intention then dont care about the results.because if its for good it will definately be liked by everyone.some things should not be categorized in great or not. [/quote]
A Baby Philosopher in the making???? :woohoo: :laugh: :)
after reading all this thread a song came in my mind-"mai shayar to nahi magar ae hasin jabse dekha maine tujhko mujhko shayari aa gayi"..
now a new role is added in the list of several roles i am playing in this world.
a philosopher hehehehehe :)
@Kalyani
Would call her philosopher by half yet?
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