for all poets on boddunan...

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everyone who write poems please do share one of your original poem here or few lines of your poems...

my poem-title-"ALL ALONE"

Miles I have crossed,
And miles I have to go,
But the only thing I know,
That I will pass every path,
Howsoever far I have to go.

I was not alone before,
The pain was there,
But it hurts now more.

It seems to be so unreal,
That many a times I have faced this fear,
I am broken into pieces now,
And with every piece I feel so down.


These are few lines of my poem I have shared with you all.. Now Its your turn..

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great vinodh..something purely written from heart.i must say after reading this sandhya should definately join back.
great vinodh..something purely written from heart.i must say after reading this sandhya should definately join back.



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Who Spent More Than A Sleepless Night
Who Did More than What She Felt Right
Braving the Heat and Dust of Many A Day
Always Looked Her Smiling Self To Say
Those Soothing,Words Ever Heard By Me
By My Side In Hours of Grief - Who's She?
A Divine Creation,Sea of Love- No other
Than the Woman Who's Gone-My Mother!!
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chinmoy ji i must say that you should now write a book of poem so that new generations students can read them and gain a spoonful of knowledge from them..isint it a good idea? :blink: :blink:
Viondh this is nice poem due to this I had tears in my eyes. Sandhya just come to site again.


This lady has achieved what looks like unachievable!! Turning Abid and Vinod into
poets,making Sasi shed bucketful of tears and what not!!
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Why not, after all am a special person. Am I not right????? :woohoo: :woohoo: :woohoo: :woohoo:
That you are Sandhya!! The way you have turned people into poets and crying bucketfuls of tears!! :laugh: :laugh: :laugh: :) :woohoo: :woohoo: :woohoo:
From the day first i was reading her name here and there and i always wanted to know who she is and here it comes now i got why people cherish and love her so much.. :)
You know when we are feeling sad or are too happy then the poetry is ultimate result.
yes and i do write poems when im very sad or very happy..but most of the time when sad..because that time feelings are best expressed through words..
Exactly, you are perfectly right. I have written more than 10,000 articles on different websites but only two poems till date because I am not that gifted. Poetry is something for real talented people. :laugh:
we cant be shakespeare.. :P so we dont have enough talent to write poetries but feelings makes us do so.. :)
I know every one cant be Shakespeare, but there are thousands other poets who are as good. In fact I am not much while it comes to poems and poetry being a hammer man (read Mechanical engineer) :laugh: :laugh:
we cant be shakespeare.. :P so we dont have enough talent to write poetries but feelings makes us do so.. :)


You can try and try and expect some improvement! But poets are basically naturally poetic like me!!
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oh im trying since 8th standard.poor me :(
im only able to do poetry when in sad mood or happy.why not every time?why? :huh:
let me think.. :unsure:
From the day first i was reading her name here and there and i always wanted to know who she is and here it comes now i got why people cherish and love her so much.. :)


That's why I uploaded my photo at least for a while....I didn't want to leave all of you loving people without even let you know, how my face would look like. :P

But again.....I can't leave you people, so sharing a little time from my present busy assignment.

Let me try to do an instant poem for you people....

Anjaane lagtha hai hume jab nayi duniya koi
Dastak dethi hai achanak kabhi
Veerane lagtha hai par jab majbooran humhein
Woh duniya chodke jaana bhi padtha hai
Lekin thanhaayiyom mein yaadein jab
Aahat detha hai kabhi kabhi
Waapas aana bhi padtha hai zaroor....
Kyon ki apna koi keemthi cheez bhoolkar
Door jaana aasaan nahi hota kabhi kabhi....
From the day first i was reading her name here and there and i always wanted to know who she is and here it comes now i got why people cherish and love her so much.. :)


That's why I uploaded my photo at least for a while....I didn't want to leave all of you loving people without even let you know, how my face would look like. :P

But again.....I can't leave you people, so sharing a little time from my present busy assignment.

Let me try to do an instant poem for you people....

Anjaane lagtha hai hume jab nayi duniya koi
Dastak dethi hai achanak kabhi
Veerane lagtha hai par jab majbooran humhein
Woh duniya chodke jaana bhi padtha hai
Lekin thanhaayiyom mein yaadein jab
Aahat detha hai kabhi kabhi
Waapas aana bhi padtha hai zaroor....
Kyon ki apna koi keemthi cheez bhoolkar
Door jaana aasaan nahi hota kabhi kabhi....


Thoda thoda smaaj me ayee!!
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From the day first i was reading her name here and there and i always wanted to know who she is and here it comes now i got why people cherish and love her so much.. :)


That's why I uploaded my photo at least for a while....I didn't want to leave all of you loving people without even let you know, how my face would look like. :P

But again.....I can't leave you people, so sharing a little time from my present busy assignment.

Let me try to do an instant poem for you people....

Anjaane lagtha hai hume jab nayi duniya koi
Dastak dethi hai achanak kabhi
Veerane lagtha hai par jab majbooran humhein
Woh duniya chodke jaana bhi padtha hai
Lekin thanhaayiyom mein yaadein jab
Aahat detha hai kabhi kabhi
Waapas aana bhi padtha hai zaroor....
Kyon ki apna koi keemthi cheez bhoolkar
Door jaana aasaan nahi hota kabhi kabhi....


Thoda thoda smaaj me ayee!!
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You don't know Hindi???? Unbelievable???? Ram and his wife speak Hindi very well :huh:
[quote]baby angel wrote:
From the day first i was reading her name here and there and i always wanted to know who she is and here it comes now i got why people cherish and love her so much..


That's why I uploaded my photo at least for a while....I didn't want to leave all of you loving people without even let you know, how my face would look like.

But again.....I can't leave you people, so sharing a little time from my present busy assignment.

Let me try to do an instant poem for you people....

Anjaane lagtha hai hume jab nayi duniya koi
Dastak dethi hai achanak kabhi
Veerane lagtha hai par jab majbooran humhein
Woh duniya chodke jaana bhi padtha hai
Lekin thanhaayiyom mein yaadein jab
Aahat detha hai kabhi kabhi
Waapas aana bhi padtha hai zaroor....
Kyon ki apna koi keemthi cheez bhoolkar
Door jaana aasaan nahi hota kabhi kabhi.... [/quote]


Copy cat, copy cat!!! :P :P :P
[quote]baby angel wrote:
From the day first i was reading her name here and there and i always wanted to know who she is and here it comes now i got why people cherish and love her so much..


That's why I uploaded my photo at least for a while....I didn't want to leave all of you loving people without even let you know, how my face would look like.

But again.....I can't leave you people, so sharing a little time from my present busy assignment.

Let me try to do an instant poem for you people....

Anjaane lagtha hai hume jab nayi duniya koi
Dastak dethi hai achanak kabhi
Veerane lagtha hai par jab majbooran humhein
Woh duniya chodke jaana bhi padtha hai
Lekin thanhaayiyom mein yaadein jab
Aahat detha hai kabhi kabhi
Waapas aana bhi padtha hai zaroor....
Kyon ki apna koi keemthi cheez bhoolkar
Door jaana aasaan nahi hota kabhi kabhi....



Copy cat, copy cat!!! :P :P :P[/quote]

:angry: :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry:
Never....it's the language of my soul that I poured in the forum of Boddunan
Then how come I have already read it?????


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