POEMS OF BODDUNAN...!

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DECEMBER...!

O you dear,see December is here,
September,October,November,
Gone for a sweet slumber,
It brings with it the bone chilling cold,
But it hardly matters,since we are too bold!!!

The gushing cold winds,
Tell us something important,
One just need to have a ear to hear,
For the message is quite clear,--
"Move out Jack with gloves and jacket,
At least care for your age bracket".

The brown leaves on trees,
Blown by southern winds,
But there is an exception,
To this age old perception,
For the Christmas tree,
Still stands erect and free,
With its awesome evergreen spree.

Can't you hear the Christmas Carols,
That rolls down like huge barrels,
Giving us a clear cut message,
That Christmas is on the presage,
Santa set on in his cart,
let us also together start,
To wait for the moonlit eve,
when we can let our dreams weave,
With Steve,Mark and Della,
Under the great December's umbrella...!

WRITTEN BY--
ajay9779.

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Ohh thats nice ajay the poem is good on december. :) :)
wow superb art you possess. Ajay keep writing poems, you are really good at it.
Wow ! What an elaborate and lovely poem on December!!! You have really done well ajay! :) :) :)
Thank you very much Sasi and Vidhi for those kind and inspiring words. But to tell you the truth, the real inspiration came to write about this poem from our honorable members Chinmoy and Kalyani who initiated the thread about writing poem on december in the forum...! :)
Ajay has actually kick started the month of December with a fabulous poem! Looking forward to seeing more poems from others now!
You are right kalyani mam .He started a good poem.

I also written a poem in my words but i think it will not good.

http://www.boddunan.com/forum/5-the-lounge/165057-no-poem-these-days-why-cant-we-have-in-the-last-month-of-2011.html
sasikanth I read your poem and it is really good. :) :) :)

Although a suggestion, why don't you post that poem in this thread created by ajay? That way all poems can be read in one single thread.
Can i post it now here.

If i posted here means it will be duplicate na.
Very good,Ajay! You poetic talent is very much in evidence! Keep it up!
Nice poem by Ajay and hope to see more poetry from all. :) :)
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@Rajani

Why don't you try one!
[quote]Can i post it now here.

If i posted here means it will be duplicate na. [/quote]

No that's okay sasikanth! Post it here now. Keeping all poems in one thread will make it easy for others to read them and comment accordingly!
[quote]@Rajani

Why don't you try one! [/quote]

YES YES YES! I want to read Rajani's poem!!! :woohoo:
Exactly, we want Rajani to gift us a poem. Hope she listens to our plea...! :)
For you guys i am posting my poem here.

Love is a precious thing than Gold.

When you are far from me love makes feel that you are nearer to me.

My heart surrondered to the ultimate love of you.

What i want all most in my life is You with love.

I want to live with you with out you i cant imagine my life.

It will be like a Life equal to a dead body.
I want to write a poem on poem.

Poem is a poem.

A single poem express many words.

It has the habit of expressing to others.

It is the meaning of many words.

It may tell us about good or bad.

It makes us laugh or cry.

This can be used to warn or praise others.

Every bodys good friend is the poem.

Poem is the feeling of a poet

poem helps in love for lovers.

This is the my second poem in my life.
sassi you need to more improve yourself more in poems .this is good one.
Isha i am not a poet.I just tried to write but it came like this but thank you.
Sasi there is a flaw in your poem,

"Poem is a felling of poet"

Here it is not "felling " It is feeling

But your poems are awesome
Thank you sarala and i have edited the felling in to feeling just check and read it.

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