Who Will Put the Balmy Hands On our Aching Hearts
Who Will Brighten the Gloom of These Nocturnal Hours,
Who Will Bring Back The Melodies Into Songs of Birds
Who Will Paint the Droopy Flowers With Shining Colors.
Who Will Give Back Life Into Mountains,Valleys And Trees.
Who Will Make the Rivers,Seas and Oceans Smile Again,
O,My Mother Nature! Come,Come! Take Away My Pain
Lift Me Into the Orbit Beyond Small Loss and Gain!
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The land that thou standeth,
brigthen the gloom of nocturnal hours
The wind that charms you away,
bringth back the melodies of the birds
The sun that shineth through,
bloometh the flower's hues
The sea that runth around
maketh the waves with joy!
The string that holdest us
strengthen the balm to our aching hearts
Small loss and pain are for a short while
The joy that cometh after,behold it with your hands
Alas the time is short , o short...........
Count them that loveth you,leave them not!!
Great! What else do I say? :woohoo: :woohoo: :woohoo: :woohoo: :woohoo: :woohoo: :woohoo: :woohoo:
The land that thou standeth,
brigthen the gloom of nocturnal hours
The wind that charms you away,
bringth back the melodies of the birds
The sun that shineth through,
bloometh the flower's hues
The sea that runth around
maketh the waves with joy!
The string that holdest us
strengthen the balm to our aching hearts
Small loss and pain are for a short while
The joy that cometh after,behold it with your hands
Alas the time is short , o short...........
Count them that loveth you,leave them not!!
Words totally fail me, this is so lovely!!! :) :) :)
Kalyani, since Chinmoy ji's poem was very melancholy, i tried to reply by giving a poem of hope....
But i couldnt find any rhyming words or any counter strike words for mountains?
What about 'mala'? Isn't it a striking word :woohoo: :woohoo:
Hoping you know the meaning of it :cheer:
Kalyani, since Chinmoy ji's poem was very melancholy, i tried to reply by giving a poem of hope....
But i couldnt find any rhyming words or any counter strike words for mountains?
I couldn't find any rhyming words but here a few alternate words for mountains - a crag, alps, a mount, or a peak, maybe you could make a new poem out of it!! :laugh:
Kalyani, since Chinmoy ji's poem was very melancholy, i tried to reply by giving a poem of hope....
But i couldnt find any rhyming words or any counter strike words for mountains?
I couldn't find any rhyming words but here a few alternate words for mountains - a crag, alps, a mount, or a peak, maybe you could make a new poem out of it!! :laugh:
Am telling, 'Mala' is the best word........(don't pronounce it as 'maala') :cheer: :cheer:
Kalyani, since Chinmoy ji's poem was very melancholy, i tried to reply by giving a poem of hope....
But i couldnt find any rhyming words or any counter strike words for mountains?
I won't slot my poem into any category as the beauty or mystique of a poem lies in the fact that its readers interpret it in their own unique way. If my poem has captured the angst of our times - it may have served its purpose. A wail may be the death-knell of a dying age or birth cry of a new age!
Who Will Put the Balmy Hands On our Aching Hearts
Who Will Brighten the Gloom of These Nocturnal Hours,
Who Will Bring Back The Melodies Into Songs of Birds
Who Will Paint the Droopy Flowers With Shining Colors.
Who Will Give Back Life Into Mountains,Valleys And Trees.
Who Will Make the Rivers,Seas and Oceans Smile Again,
O,My Mother Nature! Come,Come! Take Away My Pain
Lift Me Into the Orbit Beyond Small Loss and Gain!
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This is really good and the accompanying picture too ....it adds to the effect :)
Kalyani, since Chinmoy ji's poem was very melancholy, i tried to reply by giving a poem of hope....
But i couldnt find any rhyming words or any counter strike words for mountains?
I won't slot my poem into any category as the beauty or mystique of a poem lies in the fact that its readers interpret it in their own unique way. If my poem has captured the angst of our times - it may have served it purpose. A wail may be the death-knell of a dying age or birth cry of a new age!
So true!!even the mood can interpreted in so many different ways!!! I prefer to see it as a world that is waiting to be discovered by one who really seeks it!! Something like the world in Avatar!!! :)
Kalyani, since Chinmoy ji's poem was very melancholy, i tried to reply by giving a poem of hope....
But i couldnt find any rhyming words or any counter strike words for mountains?
I won't slot my poem into any category as the beauty or mystique of a poem lies in the fact that its readers interpret it in their own unique way. If my poem has captured the angst of our times - it may have served it purpose. A wail may be the death-knell of a dying age or birth cry of a new age!
So true!!even the mood can interpreted in so many different ways!!! I prefer to see it as a world that is waiting to be discovered by one who really seeks it!! Something like the world in Avatar!!! :)
Poems reflect our innermost feelings which are incapable of being expressed in any other forms. Giving voice to our mute thoughts!!
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